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Due to many media-related issues, the controversy has arisen over whether it has negative effects on the young people. Some people may say that movies and dramas only affect badly on young generation because they contain violent and sexual scenes. However, I firmly believe that the advantages of media far outweigh the disadvantages. This is due to the fact that movies and televisions are one of the great methods to educate the young and foster the emotional abilities of young people.
To begin with, videos aired on television can solve shortcomings of public education. Students can get second-hand experiences of the notions they acquired in their classes including Ethics, Social Studies(,) and Sciences. 구체적인 내용을 다루실 때 shortcoming of public education 의 측면도 잘 살려주셔야 합니다~ 그리고 어떻게 television 이 이를 해결하는데 도움이 되는지까지도요~ For example, I could not deeply understand environment pollution because there is was only a vague story without examples that can be found in reality. However, one of my teachers showed us movie which dealt with negative impact of overexploited natural sources, and invaded natural habitats. As a result, I surely could feel how serious the environment pollution is was thanks to the media. <과거에 있었던 일이기 때문에, 과거형으로 바꿔야겠죠? ^^> 예시가 구체적이어서 좋습니다~
Furthermore, visual effects that media gives can nurture students' senses of empathy which is so-called EQ(emotional quotient). The young are able to see, hear(,) and feel a variety of emotions of actors and actress and various situations by for watching movies and dramas. It is largely effective to develop students' abilities to empathize to varied various people. According to the research conducted by Seoul National University, people who watch at least one movie in a week have twice higher EQ than people who do not. It indicates that the more movies people watch, the higher EQ they have. It also verifies that watching movies or dramas has good influence on fostering the empathetic senses which means positive effects.
In brief, movies and televisions affirmatively impact on young students for the reasons of teaching in more effective way and development of the sense of empathy. All in all, if I had opportunity to be a teacher, I would utilize the media as additional class materials. As I mentioned before, It is highly useful and informative, which draw students' interest in class.
Understandable 하게 잘 쓰셨고, 흐름도 괜찮습니다. 수고하셨습니다~ ^^ |