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The purpose of univerisy is to find student's potential ability and improve student's skill. In order to achive the goal, many universities should invest to their libraries and other academic facilities. In this situation, sports are only regarded as the worst class and sports disturbs disturb student's study. Also, the sports are considered as a wasting waste of time. However, I strongly agree that sports can help the student's and university's purpose to be succeeded because sports provide promote the student's physical health and help to build the social network. Therefore, my view on this issue is that university athletic departments should receive the same amount of funding as university libraries.
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To start with, sports give a lot of physical benefits to the people. Many research results about sports activities show indicate that the people's emotion can be calmed down by exercise and also, people can sustain make to have strong bones, balance the body componets such as vitamin or blood, and reduce the fat level of body. To illrustrate with this point, my brother had a obestiy when he was 21 years old. My brother got numerous stresses of being obesity from parents and friends. This is why my brother decided to exercise for reducing the purpose of loosing the weight. After 6months, my brother reduced lost the 15 killograms and my brother was not no longer be an obesity. My brother satisfied his accomplishment and he had a think that whatever problems can be solved by him. ( He became more confident about himself) Therefore, with this mind, my brother became
is known a famous businessman in Korea. Also, from my experience, i had a positive result by exercise. To be specific, oneday, when i have 과거형으로 바꿔서 had to study toefl reading, but i can could
not focus on the study. Therefore, i decide(+d) to play soccer instead of studying toefl. As a result, after i had exercised, i could focus on the study. Accordingly, before i study , i always execise any thing for 30 minutes. For these benefits, I have no doubt on that universities should invest the sports activity the same funds as library. 포인트를 잘 잡으신거 같아요~^^
Then, the second reason is that sports can provide student's social skills and build the social network because sprots such as soccer, baseball, and basketball, should have many people to play. Also, this sports gives require the cooperation. The cooperation is essential ability in society. From my experience, i moved to another school when i was a high school student. I wanted to have many friends in that school but it was a difficult thing. Oneday, in athletic class, i had an opportunity to play basketball with other students. After i had played, i become became a famous guy who is good at basketball and also i could get many friends. Another examples in university, KO-YEON university's athletic meeting is the best. KO-YEON athletic meeting is well known in Korea because these two university is famous. Once a year, they had hold a soccer, baseball and basketball match. During this match event, many students and professors are coming to see the match and support thier university. This event provides the social network to students because after the match, they have a meeting to become for being friends. Therefore, i support the idea of investing same funds to the sports activity the as well as library in the university.
To summarize, i definitely blieve that universities should provide the same amount of funds to sports activities as they do to their libraries because students can get numerous benefits such as big social network and perfect body condition to study. If universities want to achive their purpose, they should invest their sports activity.
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