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Nowadays, it is getting more and more difficult for young people to be hired/be employed/find a job young people being hired. This is because that technological development automatizes automze our daily lives as well as simple official work, and deprive
job offers from students who are looking for a job after finishing their
degrees. Here, I believe that university and colleges ought to feel the
responsibility to help students end up their school years with a preordained
job. I would deal with several reasons for this from now on.
First of all, 1. when we approach this matter with a meaning
of university and its it's
standing in our whole life, I think university years are very important. This
is because we usually end up our school years in university unless we go for
master degree curriculum and here, we find a start point for our, let's
say, a kind of new life.
Therefore university exists only for teaching students but it has a role for
mentoring students with their future lives. Actually, we pay for big/huge amount of money to university and I
believe it contains a portion of helping job searching/counseling.
Therefore, in my opinion, university students deserve to be offered extra
services for finding jobs and especially much care today when it is very hard
to get any job.
1.
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Secondly, it is obviously easier for university to catch the
chances to apply for workplaces than for students to find any
vacant place in which they want to fit in.
Usually, professors are connected with some companies by each
because they do sometimes sell their knowhow that they obtain during
their studying to corporations
coorperations. In addition, if the company satisfied with the teachers’ work very much, it
sometimes scouts students in his laboratory. Here, we can find the
important role of professors as a bridge
/connection between employee and
employer. Aside from this special cases, it is reasonable that
assistance of university will make job searching much easier because it
collects mass informations from each students as well as so many
companies related to students.
For sure, it will enhance the rank of the
university or college, the percentage of students being hired after
graduation will enhance the rank of
the university or college. I
would find some commercials of university which are persuading persuating people by showing
boasting how much portion of graduate students get a job. Doubtlessly, university wants more students of it
to be hired. For these reasons, I insist the idea that university or college
has enough reason for helping its students getting a job. |