▶ Your Answer :
In this set
of materials, both the reading and the lecture deal with mass extinction. Regarding
this issue, the lecturer contradicts the writer's claim that there was a mass
extinction.
First,
according to the lecturer, sea level <새로운 문장을 시작하는 것이 아니기 때문에, 대문자가
아닌 소문자로 표시하셔야 합니다> changed gradually. He points out that coastal
species would have
adapted to new environment. This point refutes the writer's argument that
coastal species died and animals became extinct because of
fluctuating sea level.
Moreover,
<이 부분은 대문자로 표시해야겠죠? ^^> the
lecturer goes on to say that sulfur dioxide cannot stay long in atmosphere. To
be specific, when sulfur dioxide combines with oxygen, it changes into cloud
and falls down with rain. This answers contradicts the
reading passage's opinion that sulfur dioxide made decrease decreased temperature
so that animals were destroyed which caused the death of animals.
<이 문장 같은 경우 answer(답하다)보다는 contradict(반박하다)이 더 어울리는 것 같습니다. 그리고 맨 마지막 문장에 so 라는 접속사를 쓰셨는데요, 약간 연결성이 떨어지는 것 같아서, which로 대체했습니다. 확인해주세요>
Lastly, the lecturer mantions mentions that
an asteroid did not collide with the Earth. Instead, If He
claims that if the asteroid collides did collide with
the Earth, there should have been a large cracter crater as
the evidence. but However, there was
no cracter crater related with the mass extinction. <대부분 and나 but으로 새로운 문장을 시작하지 않습니다 ^^ and나
but을 대신 할 수 있는 유의어(ex. Furthermore, However
등등)로 문장을 시작해주세요> This casts doubt on the writer's claim that dust
cloud produced when the
asteroid collided with the Earth blocked sunlight which was the essential of
living to plants and animals.
대문자, 소문자 표시를 확실히 해주셔야 합니다. 가장 기초적인 부분이기 때문에
문법적인 에러 보다는 먼저 확실히 해줘야 하는 부분이라는 걸 기억해주세요! ^^ 수고하세요~ |