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These are various idea about policy change needed. For example, some people may argue that It is important to maintain and then develop policy from government. Little did I know that I have a different idea, when it comes to the statement, policy need innovation constantly. In agreement with the statement, I assert that if I had a chance to modify a policy of my country, I would like to take charge of education department.
First of all, time schedule is too dense, and this is why many students get stress and big burden. In other words, tight class schedule leads students to lost interest in study. There is example supporting this idea. Korean high school students can appear to other countries' students as monsters. This is because Korean students have classes from 7:30 to 22:00. Every single day is comprised of lectures for 50 minutes, break times for 10 minutes and having meal for one hour. This studying environment seems as if school is prison where has no freedom. It results in destroyed thought, stress and losing interest and makes student robot without thinking process.
What is more, I would like to innovate not only class schedule, but also subject matters. Korean education teaches students useless things. Putting it differently, students are not able to apply knowledge to what they learned at school to their life in society. The knowledge has an effect on only graduation test. It will not lead to any practical result. Furthermore it is likely to create students to be text bookish. Therefore, without dramatic change, there is no hope, good leader and better life.
In a nutshell, as exemplified by the examples of Korean students; packed daily life at the school and somewhat impossible application of lecture, it is clearly that I am willing to bring tremendous change in my country's points. There is no doubt in my mind that new idea of education must be looking outside the box and it will benefit student's future as well as our life.