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Some people might think that spending time with many friends is better than with a few people as there would be more brisk in their activities. However, in my opinion, hanging out with a few friends is more enjoyable and helps to build stronger bond among friends.
First of all, people can spend their time more efficiently. If people hang out with one or two friends, it is easy to make plan and decide what to do. On the other hand, in case of hanging out with many people, it is definitely hard to make one decision even on/ about where to go. Also, there would be a friends who are not satisfied with the decision. The friend might spoil everyone's feeling which must be happy while spending time with friends. 상황을 만들어서 서술하는 것은 권하고 싶은 방법은 아닙니다. 결정에 만족하지 못하는 친구들이 있을 것이고~~~~~~ 이런 문장 보다는 highlight 된 부분들을 보충설명해줄 수 있고 증명해줄 수 있는 내용들을 서술해주시는 것이 더 낫습니다. To take my case as an example, I planned to go trip with nine people who are my high school friends. There were many opinions on place to go/ where to go what place to go. Therefore, it took lots of time to decide. The worst thing was that even though we decided to go beach, two of my friends wanted to go mountain and finally, the two refused to go to trip with us. This spoiled all people's feeling. This shows how difficult making a plan with many friends is. 첫 문장을 보시면 소수의 친구들과 함께하면 시간을 더 efficiently 하게 보낼 수 있다고 했는데 이것을 직접적으로 보여주는 예시는 아니었네요.
On top of that, people can build their relationship more firmly if they spend time with a few people. There would be more opportunity to know each other and time to talk one by one. On the other hand, there would be less time to talk each other when people spend time with many people because it is evident that they would spend most of time in group. For example, I went to an amusement park with two friends. I met them at work one month ago so I was little bit uncomfortable with them. However, after spending happy and fun time with them at the park, I feel like we are closer than before and so as them. 구체적인 내용은 나오지 않았습니다. ㅠㅠ
To sum up, I firmly believe that spending free time with fewer friends is much happier than spending time with many friends as people can use time to build relationship and make it more valuable without pressure of considering everyone.
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