■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. You response will be judge on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Topic :
Is it good for teenagers to have jobs while they are still students? | |
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▶ Your Answer :
These days, many teenage students spend their time in working as a part timer. Some people praise the advantage of the working at an early age. However, I do not think that it is good for teenage students to have jobs. First, the students could waste their time to study due to a part time work. Second, working at an early age might be ineffective.
Having part time jobs seems to deprive teenage students of time to study. The time in their teenage years is the best season to learn and cultivate the elementary knowledge which will be a cornerstone of their future study in a university or college. If they spend their time in working a part time job, they might have a bit of knowledge of life, but it will take a huge of time to follow up the study which they neglected due to the work. Thus, for the higher education, teenage students should more focus on their study rather than getting part time jobs.
Some people might say that working at teenage years can help finding a vocational aptitude of students. However, many business experts claim that working at an early age is ineffective. The reason for this claim is that, since students do not have specific knowledge for jobs, the jobs of possible choice are very limited, and they hardly demonstrate their potential for vocational aptitudes. Thus, getting a right job after proper educations and trainings for jobs in a college is much more beneficial for young students. | |
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