■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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▶ Topic :Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is good for teenagers to have jobs while they are still students. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. | |
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▶ Your Answer :
The working age for teenagers has been controversial for ages. Philosophical problems and legitimatic issues are intertwined with the availability for teenagers to work. Some people are against with the early working because there would be certain problems if teenagers work such as they have to concentrate on their study and they can be exploited by greedy employers. However I strongly believe that there are many advantages when teenagers have jobs. First of all, teenagers can build independency by having jobs. If teenagers are paid for their work, they learn how to manage their wage and how much it is difficult to earn money. They learn why they have to be responsible for their tasks. I could realize this fact through my experiences. Friends who have worked from their teen are usually more responsible for their jobs and do better on their academic subjects than who did not have had jobs before. Also, we can prove it by observing successful people. Many successful people in the world worked very early. For instance, Ju-Young Jung, founder of Hyundai, and Ruyichi Konoske, founder of Mitsubichi, didn’t even graduate elementary school but they had accumulated more feats than the most of people who received higher educations. Lastly, teenagers can go through many experiences which will be very helpful for their life. The environment outside the class is full of uncertainty. Teenagers can learn how to deal with those uncertainties. They get used to overcoming situations hard to deal with and treating people. Moreover, they find aptitude and flair through having part-time jobs and internships. They recognize which field is more suitable for them and decide field of interest earlier. For example, I worked at a car engineering laboratory when I was a high school student. I realized this field is interesting and this experience was decisive when I decided engaging in electric vehicle engineering. Thus, I could save time searching for my aptitude and concentrate my time and effort on electric car early.
To sum up, there are many advantages of working at teen. Teens become independent through job experiences. In addition, experiences learned from jobs help teens in the future. However, even with these advantages, teens should be aware they are students and have to focus on their study. They have to maintain balance between work and study for their better future.
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