Most people usually have experience in (of) struggling very hard to choose one of two options
for their future life. Although there
are many people to (who) start their
own businesses for their own purposes such as big money, great success and so
on, I believe that it is better to take a position in a company and work for
the company. It can give stable income, free private time and happiness to our
life, which enriches our life (to be) much (more) comfortable, joyful, and even beautiful.
First, it provides more stable income comparing it with (compared to having one’s) his
own business. When I was in MBA School some years ago, there are
(were) two type(s) of
part-time students. Ones are (was) getting salary.
The others are (and the other,) giving salary. The people running the
businesses did really envy salary people, because there is constant income increasing a little annually in (that annually increases for those who are paid) salary people, which makes it possible to plan
and adjust family's expense size in advance.
Second, it makes the people to enjoy
much of leisure time. These days, most of company
is (companies
are) running the five-day work (five days a week).
So, most people working for the
company can spend their full time in (for) private activities (leisure)
on weekends. But (However), people
running their company do not enjoy their time even on weekend because their
businesses continue to go without stopping.
Third, it enables the people
to feel less uncomfortable (more comfortable)
and a lot happier. According to lots of survey, 90% people starting their own
business tend to be (go) bankrupt
because of very deep (serious) economic
recession after financial crisis in 2007 (2008). It drives
them into severe situation where (as) they are in
deep despair and sometimes lose the meaning of
life (means
to carry on) completely.