■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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▶ Topic : It is important to have rules about the types of clothing people are allowed to wear to work and school. Do you agree or disagree? | |
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▶ Your Answer :
Fashion is evolving every day. It is debatable whether rules about the types of clothing at work or school are essential or not. However, I maintain the rules are necessary because they help people to focus on their tasks instead of thinking about how to wear, and give a feeling of belonging to people.
Most of all, unlike other places, school and workplace are where people go every day, yet it is not easy to wear differently from day to day. Some people get stressed out paying attention to how to dress up. Therefore, if they have a series of standard for clothes at work or school, People can focus on their tasks and assignments more because they do not have to worry about clothes as much as if they do not. Likewise, rules concerning clothes at specific places help people have less pressure about clothes so that they can spend their time more productively.
In addition, if people wear similar clothes, they would feel that they belong together and unified. Also it prevents people to have prejudice of one another. For instance, students whose schools have a regulation about uniform feel less pressure than other students in schools without the regulation. During the age of puberty, they are very sensitive about clothes because in peer group, they discriminate themselves and make different groups by clothes. In this way, rules for clothes can be the alternative for those disunions in society such as school or work through wearing same clothes.
In summary, I am in favor of the opinion that there should be rules about clothes at work or school because they prevent people to waste their time thinking what to wear every morning, and consolidate them as if they are united by garments. | |
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