Some people think that they need to choose friends who are different from themselves. However, in my perceptive, it is better to have similar one friends who are similar to me and sticking hang out with them. This is because these friends have less possibility to have arguments with me, and because they can have more fun.
To begin with, a dispute between friends who are similar to themselves is unlikely to happen. Since they are aware of their each other’s personality well, they will know what causes an argument among them. For example, I have a best friend, Kevin, who is similar to me, thus well-knowing we know each other well. Despite the fact that we usually have small arguments about trivial things, we never cross the boundary that seriously making make us to get indignant. Therefore, we never are were never displeased at with each other. If I had met friends who are different from me, I would may have had a couple of experiences of violence.
On top of that, a better awareness of each other among friends, similar friends to themselves can have more entertainment. To be specific, since they are alike, their habits or private life lives will be similar same as too. Therefore, they can do whatever they want, they can do it together without any conflicts. It is human nature that people can have more fun when they join an every activity along with a group or friends rather than doing it alone, thus having more fun. Few years ago, for instance, I have met a friend who is similar to me. We had a same pastime, working-out,(what are you trying to say?) which our ages of friends usually do not like to enjoy in their leisure time. Before I met him, I used to go the gym alone. Were it not been for a similar friend If I have not met him, I would still go there by myself.
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Granted, Choosing friends who are different from themselves is definitely important too. Nevertheless, analogous friends are more influential. and They are in a pivotal position where they can make special bond, due to the fewer chance of quarrels and more fun.
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