Many parents dislike what their children playing games because parents think that playing games has a tremendous negative impact on their children. However, I strongly agree with the statement that playing games teaches us about our lives. There are two reasons why I believe playing games teaches us about life. Games teaches children about competing and cooperating to compete and cooperate with other gamers.
First of all, I believe that playing games is a method of education by teaching because it teaches us how to compete with others. We all live in the a cruel and competitive societies society. In school, we have learned how to compete with others, which means that competing is very important in our lives. If people play games, they can learn how to compete with other gamers. For example, when we are playing computer games, we recognize how do I play and choose something items to win other competitors. In the those situation, all the process of choosing some tactics and thinking how to win the game is very helpful for us. I strongly believe that this also applies to our lives. Therefore, playing games is a way to study about our lives.
Furthermore, to play game teaches us how to cooperate as well as how to compete. In our lives, cooperation is very as important as competition. We have learned that we have to be cooperative, especially when we are in some groups and or when we are playing sports. Team playing and party playing has a central role in enjoying games. For Instance, when we play a role-playing computer game, we sometimes hunt with party players in the same party. Team players have to be faithful on their own role. If someone act inappropriately like that their behavior is not important, the party will be broken when they meet powerful monsters in battlefield. I believe that this is same to our lives. If there is one player who considers their own role as cumbersome thing, the team will be hard to win the sports. Therefore, We can learn how to cooperate with other people from by playing games.
Of course, some people think that playing games is a just time-consuming. However, I assert that playing game can teach us interesting and essential factors in of our lives: how to compete and how to cooperate with others.
문장의 표현이 제한적이라는 느낌이 있어요. You have done good job expressing your opinion and supporting your reasons. However, when you talk about cooperation, you used the word “party” and “team” alternatively. 파티원이라는 단어는 게임에서 대부분 쓰이는 단어이기 때문에 consistent하게 써주시는게 좋아요. 게임의 그룹에 대해서 말할땐 “party”를 써주세요. 수고하셨습니다. |