Today, we live in the era of the film. Film industry affects our lives in various ways. We cannot imagine our pastime when we didn’t have without movie or theater. Some people insist that movies provide helpful lessons to us and this is the only value of movies. However, I strongly think that movies have much more values because they relieve our stresses and gives us a great place to have a date.
To begin with, movies provides an opportunity to relieve our stress to us. All modern people get numerous stresses from a number of sources. It seems that it is almost impossible to live without stress. Sometimes, laughter, a sense of humor or tear, however, gives a chance to run away from our stress. Movies can give us those qualities perfectly. We laugh and feel happy while we watch comedy movies and cry with when we watch sad movies. Even though movies do not give us meaningful lessons about our life, they are worth watching because they are able to give us relief.
On top of that, theaters that show us movies provide a perfect place for a date. Theaters are usually equipped with the halls in the dark and a seats for couples seat. The combination of darkness and close distance between couples gives a gorgeous mood for couples. Moreover, movies that make us cry or laugh contribute to the mood along with the combination. Thus, we can find a couple who holds each other's hands tightly and sometimes even a couple who shares kisses in theater. Regardless of the educational purpose of movies, theater and movies gives couples a perfect place for dating. We cannot deny that it is the one of the most important ability of movies.
To sum up, movies have far more values than just giving educational lessons. They can relieve our stress from daily life by purifying our emotion with tear and laughter. Moreover, theaters are an ideal place for couples to date at. In this regard, I firmly believe that movies are worth watching even if they do not have any helpful lessons.
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