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It is hard to say weather it is better to take a course in economics for basic subject.
Some people would say school must be the right place for teaching economics. However, but, essay에서 but과 so는 정말 쓰지않습니다. ) I am not one who agree with this concern. Maybe, school is the best place to learn efficiently and effectively, however, I do not think it is only option. One can learn from their parents or newspaper by own. To think about how much nowadays-students are burden for many other subjects, it is very ardent for them to handle in high school. (문장이 이해하기 힘든부분들도 있습니다. 정확히 어떤표현을 하려고했던건가요??
To begin with, students are already sick of their current condition. More subjects they get, More negative effect will arise. Concisely, to make one concentrate on what they are learning, it is better way to seek one to focus on dependable amount of subjects. Efficiency is more important than how much they learn.
여기서 왜 경제학을 배우면 안되는 이유를 써야되는거지... 공부의 효율성에 대해서만 물어보는 에쎄이가 아닌니답. 안약에 이렇게 쓰고싶으시다면 최대한 경제학과 연관을 지으시면서 말해주시길 바랄게요그리고 지금 본론이 너무 짧아요. 그만큼필요한 내용도빠졌어요 채우세요
Next, one can acquire about (전치사 필요 X) a concept of economy, from many other pathes, such as parents or news papers, magazines and certain books which are related with economics. Someday, one would come to consider about economics seriously, and it will be led to study ecnomics spontaneously and eagerly.
No matter they have no base theories, because economy is directly related to one's own life so it will be learned anyhow by one's own. (여기도 본론이 짧아요. 예시나 통계를들어주시면 정말 재미있는 스토리가 될거같아요. 앞에까지는 내용이 많이 좋습니다 ㅎㅎ.)
All in all, altough it is hard to say which opinion is better, I strongly believe that one should not invest their time on learning economics in high school period. I would rather suggest one to exert their enthusiasm to favorite subjects. To think in a long term, it is more advisable.
Comment: 글자수가 많이 모자르세요.... 글자수는 항상 적당해야합니다 350~400정도요. 그리고 너무 짧게쓰시는데 그렇게 쓰시다보면 논리전개에서 필요한 요소들이 빠지기 때문에 설득렵 없는 에쎄이로 전환이됩니다. 이점 참고하세요 ㅎㅎ 그리고 수고하셨습니다. |