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Most professors have difficulties to balance the education and doing research. Some people might say that teaching is professor’s primary work. So, they should pay more attention to teaching. However, in my opinion, doing research is more important work in broad perspective. Professors They can develop the quality of more people’s life with beneficial research results. Also, it helps them to keep their position as a professor.
First of all, (professors explore deeper more deep knowledge.) The results that professors find out Their research result can contribute not only improving the academic department but also solving complex problem and making improvement related with society and the world. For example, Einstein was also professor but he more concentrated on research. He only gave lecture when he wanted to. He spent most of his time thinking about new theories with passion. Finally he announced principle of relativity, and the popular formula ‘E=mc2’ which enabled to enabled science to make huge progress/ made make huge progress in science. In this sense, doing research can be beneficial than teaching students.
Secondly, most professors could keep their position through researching result. It is one of the criteria to access their job. Also, doing research usually needs much money. (이 문장의 역할은 무엇이라고 생각해야합니까? 갑작스럽게 돈이 필요하다는 이야기는 왜 나온 걸까요? 이보다는 어떻게 교수라는 자리를 지키는 데 연구가 도움을 주는지를 서술해주세요) However, the salary from the university is often not enough. So, doing research could help to earn extra money from organization and company. According to the research conducted by Korea National Statistics Bureau, more than eighty percent of the professor says that they focus more on doing research to retain their position (경제적 의미의 POSITION 이 아니었다면 위에서 언급하신 부분들 방향을 바꾸시는 것이 좋습니다.) and keep teaching. They also add that the key factor to improve the lecture is doing research. So it is indispensable to them.
In conclusion, doing research is more critical for professor. Academic results can give positive impacts/influences to students, and more, to the world/ can contribute to people ranging from students to world. Helping more people is good cause to do research. Also, the quantity of research is designated for keeping their position. To teach and keep making make progress in academic parts, doing research is more important than educating.
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