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(자연스럽게 주제로 이어갈 수 있는 이야기 같은 것들을 짧게 언급하셔도 됩니다) I think people need to get information from various news sources to stay well-informed. (why do you think so? Write your two reasons here.)
One reason I think is that is people cannot rely on only one source to get a balanced view on a certain issue. Just like people talk differently about the same topic, even credential news agencies offer different views to people. (노란색으로 highlight 된 부분들이 이번 문단을 이끌어 줄 핵심 부분입니다. 예를 쓰시더라도 이와 밀접한 관련이 있는 것을 사용하도록 해야합니다.) We often encounter differences in views among between news agencies even though the duty of media is to be objective and to deliver the truth is the duty of media. Some news source talks critically on a certain matter, while other newspapers are in favor of the same matter. So, if one only hears about a certain side of the matter, then the person is likely to have a biased opinion, not balanced, about the topic. (can you give me an example?)
Another reason is that every news agency focuses on different(,) and specific issues. Why do you think so? (to attract more people 이런 것도 이유가 될 수 있겠죠?) One news source talks assertively on a certain matter, while other news sources don’t even mention about that matter. Therefore, people just should not accept the information offered by a single news source as perfect information the whole world. Through multiple news sources, people can be better informed with get better informed of diverse facets of the world.
To sum up, I think it is important to be exposed to plural news sources to comprehend current issues better because each news source conveys different events, or different views on the same event. Various news sources definitely help people to get abundant information.
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