*진하게 표시한 부분은 제가 파악한 문단의 주요 내용이니 참고하세요^^
These days, some people suffer from insomnia. According to the reading passage, there are many causes make people keep awake all night. lecture에서는 어떤 이야기를 하는지 서론에서 함께 소개해주세요. ex. The lecturer gives some advices for this.
First, in the reading passage, stress and anxiety is one of the causes of insomnia. Insomnia usually happens to people who do not resolve their problem. 문제를 풀지 못하는 사람, 이라는 표현보다는 문제상황을 겪는 사람 혹은 people in trouble, people who are in problematic situation 정도로 표현하는 것이 더 자연스럽습니다. In this regard, the lecturer claims that people who suffer insomnia by stress and anxiety should remove their worry. There are some ways to remove people’s worry such as writing down their problems, trying to avoid their problems, establishing bed time and so on. These ways will help people to clean their mind therefore people will easily fall asleep. reading passage에서 제시한 문제점(원인)과 그에 대한 lecture의 해결책 제시에 대한 내용구조를 잘 정리한 문단입니다.
Secondly, people sometimes suffer from insomnia transiently. suffer를 타동사처럼 사용하기도 하지만, insomnia와 사용할 경우에는 계속해서 '시달리는' 뉘앙스의 뜻으로 쓰이므로 suffer from의 표현이 더 자연스럽습니다. This insomnia is called intermittent insomnia. Intermittent insomnia is related to lifestyle factor such as using taking caffeine, nicotine or alcohol. The lecturer suggests that people should avoid caffeine food. For example, when a person who always drinks coffee suffers from intermittent insomnia he or she should replace coffee with in to water or noncaffeine non caffeine tea, also trying not to drink alcohol before going go to bed will help.
Third, insomnia is sometimes related to the environment such as noise. Most people have difficulty difficult to fall falling asleep when they hear disturbing noises around them for example noises which come like noise from traffic, airplanes, television. may people keep awake. To solve this problem, the lecturer says that people have to recondition their bed room. He argues that people need to remove noises by block their windows or change their bed sheet into good quality sheet.
전반적으로 내용 정리에 필요한 부분을 잘 노트테이킹해주신 것 같습니다. 문법실수가 많으니 활용예를 잘 익혀서 어색한 문장이 되지 않게끔 유의해주세요. 문제지의 답안과 직접 확인하셔서 노트테이킹에서 빠진 부분이나 잘못 이해된 부분은 없는지 다시 한 번 내용 체크해주세요. 수고 많으셨습니다^^