*진하게 표시한 부분은 제가 파악한 문단의 주요 내용이니 참고하세요^^
The lecturer describes that online degree service has been gaining popularity because of its advantages. She casts doubts on the reading passage's argument that online degree program has disadvantages like cheating or a lack of interpersonal relations. topic과 두 지문의 반대되는 입장을 간결하게 잘 소개한 서론입니다.
To begin with, the lecturer asserts that discriminating online program is a thing of the past. Online degree program has a number of famous professors and gives the best lecture to its students. Accordingly, companies started to give a credit to online degree program and now consider considers the program as the same as conventional degree program. These points directly contradict the reading passage's claim that companies do not trust online degree service. 대립되는 두 지문의 입장을 잘 정리한 문단입니다. 이 경우 lecturer의 main argument는 온라인프로그램은 과거와 다르다, 가 아니라 온라인 프로그램의 전문성을 회사에서도 인정하고 있다는 내용이므로 이 부분을 전면에 제시해서 강조하는 것이 더 좋습니다.
On top of that, the lecturer claims claim that students who study with online degree program also have active interpersonal communication. They are able to chat, e-mail and have a conference call each other. Therefore, there are is no difference differences between this communication and one from multinational companies. 한문단으로합쳐주세요 This refutes the reading passage's praise that students who study with online degree program do have less social and interpersonal skill than ones who study with conventional program.
Lastly, the lecturer contends that cheating committed in online program can be prevented easily. It can be possible by using 'proctor'. Most computer labs have the proctor and students who study online can take a test under a monitor of the proctor in computer labs. That would prevent students from cheating. Consequently, online degree service surely is able to give a credible assessment of students' ability. These facts counter the reading passage's assertion that cheating is a widespread problem in online degree service.
전반적으로 내용 정리에 필요한 부분을 잘 노트테이킹해주신 것 같습니다. 대립되는 요소들을 소주제에 맞게 문단별로 잘 정리한 글입니다^^ 문제지의 답안과 직접 확인하셔서 노트테이킹에서 빠진 부분이나 잘못 이해된 부분은 없는지 다시 한 번 내용 체크해주세요. 수고 많으셨습니다^^