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These days, a growing number of people strongly
believe that it is better to watch movies at a theater because we can enjoy the
latest released movies early. However, contrary to this notion, I strongly
believe that watching movies at home is a better choice. The rationale behind
this is that it brings more convenience and enjoyment.
<굳이 템플릿에 맞춰서 적으실 필요는 없습니다. 더 캐치하게 글을 써주시면 좋을 것 같습니다~ ^^>
First of all, watching movies at
home gives more chances to select a film and show time. The fundamental reason
is that we can choose movie freely and watch it when we want. However, if we
watch movies in a theater, we cannot help adjusting our schedule to show times
to watch movie which we want to watch. From my experience, I usually enjoy
watching movies when I have some free time in the
past time. Unfortunately, most of the time, I was not able to watch
movies because I have to wait for a long time to watch it I was interested in.
Therefore, I began watching movies at my home by renting DVD. After doing like
this, I can enjoy movies anytime which I have I
wanted to watch. Thus, it is evident that watching movies at home is more
flexible.
Moreover, I can enjoy movies with
family and friends more freely. This is largely because we can talk and eat
everything without considering other people. For example, I like share sharing opinions about movies with friends and family
and eat something during watching movie. 라는 동사가 share(동사) 뒤에 나왔기 때문에, 원형 그대로 쓰실 수 없습니다. –ing를 붙이던가, 상황에
따라서 to 또는 전치사를 붙여주셔야 합니다 ^^>
However, in a cinema, I have to be quiet during
a show time to avoid disturbing others and can not eat foods making since it makes a noises.
Thus, I usually watch movies at my home to enjoy movies as my pleasure. In this
sense, watching movies at home is more enjoyable.
In conclusion, without any doubt,
I firmly believe that it is smarter for us to watch movies at home than to watch movie at a theater. The reason is that
watching movie at a theater is likely to derive us of the right of the choice
about movies and pleasure with others. All in all, I am convinced that these
are the most important factors for enjoying movie.
대체적으로 잘 쓰신 것 같습니다 ^^ 수고하세요~
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