▶ Your Answer :
There is are some arguments (some이 들어가서 복수형이니 +s) over whether that old architectures should be preserved rather than replaced replacing it with modern building. From my point of view, I am agreement agree with the idea to preserve old architectures.(개인적으로 이렇게 쓰면 더 부드럽게 에세이 흐름이 될꺼같아요~^^)
This is largely because that historic building is valuable for visited spot. Moreover, people can learn and feel its historical meaning.
First of all, I believe that it is very attractive place for tourists those who want to experience other cultures. Although it is old, architectures' having distinct historical value shows its countries cultures directly. It should be interesting for tourists because of its unique, contrary to a modern building which is similar to each other. Considering this respect, old and historical building is valuable to as a tour spot. Italy is a case in point. When I was visited Italy, I was impressed to see its a numbers of historical architectures. The whole city is full of enormous tourist spots. In practice, Italy earns astronomical profit from tourist industry.
On top of that, people can learn and feel vivid historical trace through historical buildings. All heritages have historical massages messages. That’s why That is the reason why we build up museums and preserve artifacts having historical value. Old building is In like manner, we can see where and how past people lived in the past, moreover important historical event is reappeared in historical places. This is much more directive rather than that reading a book or just looking at a picture. In Korea, there is a bridge which is spotted by blood because an a past official officer was killed by some betrays. betrayers. And the Government decided not to destroy it although it is horrible, and it became a historical spot for learning loyalty. Therefore For these reasons, old buildings should be preserved for to teach history for people.
To sum up, we can know understand old building’s historical value. In addition, we can make profit by making it as tourists tour sites. Moreover, we can learn about our traditional and historical events through those buildings.
(앞서 서술했던 내용을 간추려서 쓰는게 좋을 것같아요- ^^)
comment: 문법 (복수,단수)를 조금만 신경 쓰시고, 동사가 자주 빠지는 문장이 많이 보여요~ 형용사와 명사 구분도 필요한듯해요~^^ |