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As for me, it
is preferable to watch serious movies rather than to watch fun movies (for
some). However, others would say Some
people says that watching movies is for entertainment,
so(,) that watching serious movies is ridiculous and
it also provides stress.
I have two reasons to support that there are more positive
effects than entertaining one when we watch serious movies.
First of all, it provides valuable lesson. For example, a couple
of weeks ago, I watched a Korean
movie called "doo bun mugung". Its
story was about a man struggling with his handicapped legs damaged by car
accident. Despite his disadvantage, the man became
an famous F-1 driver in the world. His strong
will impressed me and I learned strong will from him
and it helped me to overcome my weaknesses.
In contrary, you can easily find out that, when after watching fun
movies, there is are
nothing remaining in your mind my
head, although it is fun while watching.
In addition, serious movies contain amusing and entertaining
part also either. Besides, unlike
fun movies, it has imaginative stories stroies
and it provides more fun by stimulating one's curiosity curiousity.
So, people can concentrate more than then
on fun movies moveis. And it also helps
to refresh themselves.
In brief, watching serious
movies are better than watching fun movies because of valuable merits it
provides. People are able to earn valuable worthful
lessons with relieving their stress. If you want to watch some movie, I strongly
recommend you to enjoy serious movie.
comment: 반복적인 단어의 사용이 많습니다. Fun movie 와
serious movie 가 글 전체에 빈번하게 등장하는데요~
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