▶ Your Answer :
It is often said that playing computer games serves as a fun way
to recharge energy. However, I believe that computer games have many negative
aspects for two reasons: computer games stimulate violence and distract people
from future employment.
To begin with, computer games introduce and
stimulate violence. This is due to the fact that computer games tend to have
many stimulating contents such as exaggerated actions, sexuality, and vulgar
language in order to attract the player's attention. Thus, people who lack a
sense of morality and judgement often imitate and pick up such contents. For
example, Jun Kim, a fifteen-year-old boy male in Korea, had played computer games all day
long ranging from action games to role playing games because his parents were
busy with work. He saw a game describing a gun as a good way to solve problems
and promote a social justice. Finally, He ended up hunting his
friend thinking that but he thought it was okay to commit such action because
he just copied what was on the game, which seems cool to him.
In addition, playing computer games has a
negative influence on preparing for future employment. This is due to the fact that when students
spend a lot of time on playing games, they cannot develop their
expertise. Moreover, as the modern society is becoming increasingly competitive
and specialized, today's job markets require job candidates with such a high
degree of expertise. According to a study conducted by Seoul National
University of Korea in 2010, there was a difference between two groups of
students: Group A had played more than 4 hours a day on average, and Group B
had not been allowed at all. Instead, Group B spend most of their time on
major-related activities in order to further their expertise. After ten years,
the researchers tracked down the same groups and reported that not only the
employment rate of Group B was twice higher than that of the former group, also
employees of Group B had 26 percent higher payment on average. This implies
that restricting the amount of game time can contribute to preparing the
future.
In brief, although playing computer games
allows people to relieve their stress, its disadvantages outweigh its
advantages because it often makes people more violent and keep students from
building their career.
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