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Most people tend to think that getting a high-paying job is regard a job with a higher salary as an important element in their life because the higher salary not only make their life better but also provide them material abundance. However, in my opinion, a job that gives you lots of vacation time is better. Even if people who have lots of leisure time don’t seem to work hard in their job, in fact, by having their own time, they are able to perform much efficiently at work and make atmosphere in work cheerful and pleasant.
To begin with, lots of vacation encourages people to work harder and to perform better than people who work for whose with a higher salary. Human being is not like a hero such as the Superman or Batman; people do need free time to release their stress and escape from pressure/routines by releasing any pressures and stress so that their brain and mind take a break. In my experience, I was part-time teacher worked at academy teaching students as a part-time job. At first, I considered that working everyday with higher salary is much better than working less with lower salary. However, as time passed by, I became frustrated and tired easily; I couldn’t teach students well(,) and even tiny things made me get angry and upset easily. I realized that having free time is needed as much as being diligent to perform well in my job.
Secondly, people are able to spend more time with their family and friends by having lots of vacation time. Being with family is important because people usually get energy and pleasant from their family; they can have things or time which they cannot have at work. It is important to balance between family and work. If person spend much more time working than spending time with family, he or she is not responsible for family. (글의 흐름이 잘못 된 것 같습니다. 이번 글의 안내책자 역할을 아는 것은 intro 입니다! Intro에서 말씀하시기를 직장의 분위기를 좋게한다고 하였는데 실제적으로 본론2에서는 그런 언급이 없고 방향 설정도 잘못되어 가정으로부터 에너지를 얻는다고 되어있습니다. 문단 전반에 걸친 수정작업이 이루어져야 할 것 같습니다.)
Overall, due to the several reasons above, I strongly believe that a job that gives you lots of vacation time is much better than a job that gives you a higher salary and not much free time. There is a quote, which says “Money doesn’t make one’s happiness”; higher salary might offer you physical materials, but having time with people whom you love gives you much more valuable things.
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