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In this rapidly changing and anarchic society, being a leader would experience bring numerous problems and challenges to an individual who desire to be a leader. It is better to be a follower because working as a leader gets creates high level of stress. On top of that, followers can will learn a lot from leaders in order to achieve for their personal success.
To start with, being a leader is not the best decision to make if one does not want to get extreme stress wants to keep at bay from excessive stress (being a follower helps to keep excessive stress at bay). This is evident when one ponders that how many problems and responsibilities leaders have to deal with. People may have the belief that a leader position would grant them a fortune and honor. However, people should consider the allure of money and reputation is at expense of their health and family relationship. For example, according to a recent study, the level of stress leaders have is twice higher than followers have. Also the study showed a shocking fact that the suicide rate of employers is not comparable to that of employees. This study indicates that being a follower would be a better way to live balanced and healthy lives.
In addition, followers have invaluable opportunity to develop their skills and careers. This is largely because followers will be trained by masters of their fields as well as various kinds of life lessons such as leaders’ life stories/ stories of life. The period of training and lesson will have a positive influence on followers. As a result followers do not have to take the high risk of paving a new way or starting their own businesses. To illustrate this point, many successful leaders in South Korea had worked in companies for 5 years in average 5 years. According to their accounts, it was very important for them to learn and experience the well-developed system from companies they worked before being a leader because they were able to minimize failures by observing previous companies’ countless trials and errors.
To conclude, being a follower is far better than being a leader. Not only followers do not have to suffer from the excessive stress from responsibilities but also(,) they followers have chances to learn more about their careers and personal life lessons from leaders who already had been through the same phases of life.
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