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We live in flood of knowledge. Simply, everybody can obtain any knowledge whether they do something to get it or not by either doing a particular things or not doing anything. That's why the adage says "Knowledge is strength". With regard to this broad topic, one interesting question to contemplate is which of the following source of information we get is more important between accumulated experience and reading books. From experience or books? We can acquire useful information from both. But, considering its intensiveness and the amount, I can definitely say that knowledge knowledage from experience is much more worth than from a variety books.
To start with, it is undeniable no denying that an experience it gives us more impressive recognition. (supportive sentence 주세요~) When we just look at the obtained knowledge, we may consider knowledge that is exposed to us is the same. However, if we think about more detailed aspects of recognition from experiences, we will find our life experiences can change us a better person. (정확하게 무엇을 말하는지는 잘 모르겠습니다.ㅠ) For instance, when I was young, one of my closest friend, Myung-su, would steal in a store. And, he got caught one day and penalized according to by my primary school code. At first, he lied over and over. But, when his teacher enticed him to be an honest person, he was turned into a new person. He deeply regretted his mistakes and tried to be a good example of others. Furthermore, he tried to do great job even in the school. That's what happened to him. This is just an example, but it clearly shows that how a person could be changed reacts by the knowledge obtained by an experience.
Secondly, there are more chances to learn from knowledge gotten by experiences. (why do you think so?) We have plenty of information around us. If you like to read readking and find a good value in it, it might be a good way. On the other hand, the information we get in our live is are much greater and more. (도대체 왜 그렇다고 생각하시는 건가요?)In today's society, we have a computer, TV, Internet as well as newspapers. Those are the ones that you can get information achieve easily and readily if you want. Convenience, accessibility accessability, and availability are the benefits that our technology has given to us. What's more is that those devices/tools a vast majority of contain wider range of information than books contains larger information from a book. (글의 흐름이 바로 잡힌다고 할 수는 없습니다. 경험을 통해 배울 수 있는 기회가 더 많다고 했는데요~ 이에대한 구체적인 이야기는 없고, 티비나 컴퓨터 인터넷 등에 관한 이야기는 있는데 이것들을 “경험” 이라고 볼 수 있을까요?)
In conclusion, above examples and detailed statement illustrate why and how the knowledge gotten by experiences is better. That's why I'm pretty sure that we should accept its knowledge very seriously.
(전반적인 내용의 정리가 필요하며 문장을 clear 하게 쓰시는 연습이 필요합니다. 수고하셨습니다~) |