We live in flood of knowledge. (Awkward. Please refer to English-English dictionary to understand the nuance and usage of this word. You can also read news article that use this word.) Simply, Everybody can obtain any knowledge by either doing a particular things or not doing anything (yes. Be straightforward and direct. ) That is 's why there exists the adage "Knowledge is strength". With regard to this broad topic, one interesting question to contemplate is which of the following information we get is important: From either life-experience or books. ? We can acquire from both. But, considering its intensiveness and the amount, I can definitely say that Knowledage knowledge accumulated from life-experience is much more worth than knowledge gained through reading books.
To start with, It is no denying (avoid using this expression in TOFEL writing test. Subject missing. ) that it gives us our knowledge built as a result of life-experience influence us more deeply and enable us to recognize right and wrong more easily ( faulty diction. The expression “impressive recognition” in English has different nuance and meaning from what you think. You are not using this expression in a proper context, thus making the meaning confusing. It’s hard to understand what you mean. Unclear.). When we just look at the obtained knowledge, we may consider knowledge that we built from every day experience that is exposed to us is the same. (knowledge cannot be “exposed.” We might be able to be exposed to flood of information. Please understand the meaning of knowledge by referring to English English dictionary. ) However, if we think about more detailed aspects of recognition from experiences, we will find out that our life experiences can change us a better person (still, your meaning is vague. Recognizing what? Do you mean “realization “ or “getting life lesson?” what do you mean? Say directly. “recognizing “ is rather similar to “perceiving “ something. This word is not ideal to show what you mean in this particular context). For instance, when I was young, one of my closest friend, Myung-su, would steal in a store. And, he got caught one day and penalized by my primary school code. At first, he lied over and over. But, when his teacher enticed him to be an honest person, he became was turned into a new person. He deeply regretted his mistakes and tried to be a good example of honesty. of thers. Futhermore, he tried to commit himself greatly do great job even in the school. That's what happened to him.(readers already know this is what happened to him) This is just an example, but it clearly shows that a person changes his or her behavior when he or she gets a lesson from real experience rather than knowledge based on books. reacts by the knowledge obtained by a experience. (people cannot “react” by knowledge. I don’t know how to explain. You need to understand the nuance and usage of word “react” and “knowledge.” This combination is awkward and confusing.)
Secondly, there are more chances to learn from knowledge accumulated from life- gotten by experiences. We have a plenty of information around us. If you like readking and if you find a good value in it, reading It might be a good way (to what? For what? Vague). On the other hand, the information the knowledge we get in our lives from our life-experiences are much greater and more. In today's society, Nowadays, we have a computer, TV, Internet as well as newspapers. Those are the ones that you can achieve (what do you mean? TV is not the one you can “achieve.” Do you mean “acquire/have?” ) easily and readily if you want. Convenience, accessability,->accessibility and availability are the benefits that our of having such devices has given to us. What is more, is those a vast majority of information those devices contain larger information from books a book.
In conclusion, above examples and detailed statement illustrate why and how the knowledge built gotten by life-experiences is better than knowledge based on books. That is why I'm pretty sure (too colloquial) I am sure that we should take accept its knowledge based on real experience very seriously. |