Topic ::A person's childhood is more important for the development of intellectual ability in his or her entire life than any other period.(30분)위에것은 30분 동안 연습해서 쓴글이고 아랫글은 제가 보완해서 쓴 부분입니다.
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| ▶ Your Answer : People have different ideas person's childhood is more important for the development of intellectual ability in his or her entire life than any other period. I,however, disagree with the given statement because intellectual capacities are formed by the continual studies, experiences and social factor in person's adulthood.
First of all, long-term of studies enhance people's intellectual capacity. That's because specific studies require people to learn step by step. For example, in the university physics class, what i experienced was that step and repeat learning is need to expanding their knowledge. Not only could we know how to calculate but also could we learn about properties of objects. From my experience, I firmly believe that the most important thing for knowledge is long-term studies.
Secondly, the knowledge gained from experiences increase person's understanding. that's because we can guess the some information which was gained from our experiences. To be specific,I experienced that the fewer could we pour the mass of water, the easier could we boil water. From our observation. we can readily expect that mass is related with specific heat. Such information, comes from our life and helps us to understand the our studies. From my perspective, I think that wisdom gained from our real life allow us to understand easily.
Finally, Social factors are motivations of learning more. Because people tend to be ambitious relating to their goals and achievement for higher salaries and better jobs. And trend on modern society require a person who learn more. As a result, such an social factor moves people to learn their best.
Too sum up, I strongly disagree that term which is important for person's learning is in childhood because of continual studies, experiences and social factors. |
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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words.
■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |