The working age for teenagers has been
controversial for ages. Philosophical problems
and legitimatic (ethical and practical)
issues are intertwined with the availability for teenagers to work. Some people
are against with the early working because there would be certain problems if teenagers work such as they have to
concentrate on (lack of concentration to)
their study and they can be exploited
(exploitation) by greedy employers. However(,) I strongly believe that there are many advantages
when teenagers have jobs.
First of all, teenagers can build
independency by having jobs. If teenagers are paid for their work, they (will) learn how to manage their wage and how much it
is difficult to earn money. They (will) learn
why they have to be responsible for their tasks. I could realize this fact
through my experiences. (My) Friends who have
worked from (since)
their teen(age) are usually more responsible for
their jobs and do better on their academic subjects than who did not have had
jobs before. Also, we can prove it by observing successful people. Many
successful people in the world worked
very early (since
young). For instance, Ju-Young Jung, (the)
founder of Hyundai, and Ruyichi Konoske, (the) founder
of Mitsubichi, didn’t even graduate elementary school but they had accumulated
more feats (experience)
than the most of people who received
higher educations.
Lastly, teenagers can go through many
experiences which will be very helpful for
(in) their life. The environment outside the
class is full of uncertainty. Teenagers can learn how to deal with those
uncertainties. They get used to overcoming situations hard to deal with and
treating people. Moreover, they find aptitude and flair through (by) having
part-time jobs and internships. They recognize which field is more suitable for
them and decide field of interest earlier. For example, I worked at a car
engineering laboratory when I was a high school student. I realized this field
is interesting and this experience was decisive when I decided engaging (to engage)
in electric vehicle engineering. Thus, I could save time searching for my
aptitude and concentrate my time and effort on electric car early.
To sum up, there are many advantages of working