Some people say that television has hurt
the ability of people to communicate with one another. They insist that people these days, don’t talk to each other (these days) as much as before TV was invented.
However(,) I think TV has helped us to communicate with people for two different
reasons. First, TV delivers the news from one side of the Earth to the other side. Second, TV provides us (with) good topics to talk about with our friends.
Before TV was invented, it took (from) few days to few months (un)till
one hears about an event from the opposite side of where
he lives (the globe). But since TV
was invented, it has played a role of a window for us, which displays the view
of the world. Now, even if something happens in Africa, it takes only few hours
for one, who lives in America, to hear about it. Let me take my experience
as an example. Few years ago, there was a big earth quake happened in Haiti where it would take almost
20 hours with (in) airplane from my house,
(in) Korea. However(,)
it took less than an hour for me to hear the news through the TV. TV lets us to communicate with people on the opposite
side of the Earth.
If you take a closer look at people’s
conversations, you can find out right away how many people are talking about TV
shows they watched. TV also plays a (the) role of a bridge between people. Whenever I get
tired of talking about some boring and same
topics like the weather or the color of the shirts that I am wearing, it is
always nice to talk about TV shows I like. Many studies have proved that many
people talk about TV shows they watch when they don’t know what to say in a
conversation.
In conclusion, I personally think TV has
contributed to help(ing) people to communicate with one another. It has let us
to communicate with people from other
countries, and always provides us (with) good
and fresh topics for our conversations with friends.
(잘 쓰셨습니다. 굳이 어려운 단어를 쓰지 않으시고도 좋은 글을 보여주셨네요! Provide (someone) with (sth) / Provide (sth) 이거랑 However hard it was, (blah) / However, it was hard. 이 두 가지만 기억해주세요. Help (someone) to (do sth)의 to도 있다고 틀리진 않는데 없게 많이 씁니다.)