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In the set of materials,both the reading passage and lecture deal with the advantages and disadvantages on studying in groups.Regarding this issue, The lecture maintains that some students not only do not participate in the study , but also show up in the promised places.As a result, it give rise to the nagative effect on all other members in groups. (필요없는문장이요) This contradicts the writer's assertion that studying in groups gives the motivation among group members and it could supplement one another. (원래 앞에 안지워도 되지만 인트로가 너무길어서... 감점요인에 하나로 작용될까바 지웠습니다. ㅠㅠ 인트로는 정말 기본적인 요소들만 들어가면됩니다.)
First of all,according to the lecture, assistance among group members is not interactive so that some students always have to prepare for resources for others and others usually take advantage of them. This challenges the writer's viewpoint that it is more efficient that studying in groups on the grounds that sharing a knowledge and discussing some opaque problems together, have a great deal of benefits for students. (첫번째 포인트 정말 잘쓰셨어요. 렉처 <->리딩 서로 반박포인트 좋았고, 그리고 supporitng idea도 상당히 깔끔하네요 ㅎㅎ)
in adittion,The lecture goes on to say that students can not use the time properly. As long as students get together in a limited place, they will be chatting and it will be only advantageous in socializing each other, however, but not studying efficiently. This refutes the writer's argument that students are able to save time researching respectively. Big burden will be divided each other so that students misuse the time finding their resources.(두번째 포인트도 정말 잘쓰셨습니다.)
Comment: 처음에 인트로에서 분량이 너무길어 좀 의심했습니다 (많이 잘하는분은 아니구나..) 하지만 포인트들을 읽을 때 마다 정말 잘쓰시는걸 느꼇어요 ㅎㅎ. 인트로길이는 최대한 간추려주세요...ㅎㅎ 수고하셨습니다 ^^ |