These days, the
world is getting closer with other countries due to the high technology items and globalization policy. As a result, some consider that
several small languages might be in danger of extinction. Others say that it
would be good for everyone who will (to) speak in common languages. In this essay, I will
discuss the dangers of both outcomes.
Indeed, several
minority languages are disappearing. I am sure that this is a major loss. First
of all, people think (-) to a certain
degree (-) rooted in their mother tongue. Their
first language is bound up with their cultural,
life, religious beliefs and identity. A second point is (the) loss of diversity. (It
is better to make your first and second points begin in a similar way, so that
the reader can draw a relationship much easier) Different languages have (lead to) different ideas, culture and ways of looking
at the world. Take, for example people living in Canada who are (the) first nation’s people. They have their own
language and tradition. In the future, they will lose their aboriginal (first) language and culture due to the globalization.
(Are you talking about Canadians we generally talk
about, or Canadian Indians? If it is the later, what to you mean by the “first
nation’s people”?) Even, the
young(er) generation speaks in English instead
of (the) aboriginal language. Hence, there are
negative views to destroy (view that globalization
destroys) diversity.
On the other hand,
globalization brings a wide range of benefits to future generations such as being united (unity)
in(to) one community without any discrimination.
What is more, new generations do not need to suffer from language barriers. That's(,) because
they are able to speak some (in a) common
language like English. For instance, translations
have (has) lots of disadvantages to
communicate(ion)
with others if people cannot speak in English. Business is more difficult,
traveling is more complicated and misunderstandings arise. Global collaboration
will take many decades and will result in a loss of diversity (in) culture and
language. However, it is a good idea which will improve people's life quality
with economic growth and technology development.
All things
considered, if people want to survive in the world and in the future, following
the globalization trend would be a better idea for these reasons which I have
discussed above. Even though there is a major loss of diversity in culture
owing to the extinction of minority languages. I believe that bringing more
profits from globalization is a better option than saving these languages.