▶ Your Answer :
Due to the fact that Teachers are
usually seen as people
who are tasked to impart standing for teach the knowledge that is why
some people argues
argue that giving knowledge to students is
more important than the ability to relate well with students. On
the other hand, how hard I may think that the ability to make a good connection between with students and teachers are more essential skills
for a teacher.First, if the
teacher has the ability to have a bond with his or her students, it has a
positive effect on the students. Also, if the teacher makes a connection with
the students, not only will the students develop academically but also
socially. There are two
following reasons.
First
and foremost, students have more positive effect when they have good connections between with their teachers. To be specific, when students have relate well with their teacher, not only can they can share their problems but they also improve academically. in other words, students believe
teacher, so students will study more harder. According to Based on my personal experience when I attended university, I had a teacher who was is very kind and generous so I sometimes
shared my problems and I totally believed and followed him. Therefore, to keep
this relationship I tried harder than any other subjects because I want to be a
good student especially in his class. Therefore, due to when students have a good relationship
with their teacher, they have it has a positive effect.
Second,
making developing good connections between
students and teacher is not only good for school grades but also good for social lessons. Students who are familiar with their
teacher they will spend much time with their teacher to maintain that connection so they can get a lot of advice and
morals which normal students can’t get. School teachers have more experiences than young
students the society
earlier, so they have a lot to teach the students from their experience.
However, in the class it is impossible to teach these kinds of things because students
need to learn about subjects, but if they are relating well with teachers then they can share their experiences individually. Therefore, making developing a good relationship between students and teacher is good for social lessons.
To
sum up, a teacher’s ability to relate well with students make them have
has a more positive effect to students. and It also gives social lessons which is are very valuable when it comes to the student. Therefore, I think a teacher’s ability to make a good connection with between students is better are far more overarching than just merely giving lessons to them. give them knowledge for these reasons.
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Incorrect: First, and foremost, students have more positive effect,
when they have good connections with their teachers.
Better; First and foremost, students have more positive effect
when they have good connections with their teachers.
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