▶ Your Answer :
Of course, a lot of court cases deal with hostile
friends fighting over unpaid money these days, and there is a proverb saying
that "Lend your money and lose your friends". Thus, some critics may
argue that lending your money can deteriorate the true friendship. However, I strongly believe that financial loans
between friends do not ruin friendship at all. <템플릿을 따르지 않아서
그런지, 인트로가
좀 좋은 것 같습니다>
To begin with, we can reinforce our friendship by lending
money to each other. This is because going
through a hard time together can solidify relationship. Let me take my personal
experience as an example. When I was sixteen years old, my best friend 'Jin-won
Kim' lended lent 의 과거는 lent 입니다> my money in order to pay for high
school tuition. he He was so poor that he
could not afford to pay for expensive school tuition. So, I lended lent him my money and he paid back the money after
earning some money by working in several part time jobs. After six
years later, I accidently had a car accident and needed a large amount of money
for being hospitalized. Although I
did not have any money, he lended lent me
his hard-earned money. So I could overcome
that situation. Had it not been for, I could not have overcame overcome that crisis. By having these
experiences, we could build strong unity and maintained our true friendship.
On top of that, lending money itself does not is not related to deteriorating friendship. In other
words, the relation between lending money and loosing losing friends is not proportional. 는 잃어 버리다 라는 뜻이고요, loose는
헐렁헐렁하다 라는 뜻입니다> According to the research of Korea Financial
Research Institute, the largest financial research organization in
the South Korea,
people who lended thier lent their money
to friends
and maintained the frienship friendship took
73 percent of all poll participants. Meanwhile, people who did not lend their
money to their friends and maintained friendship took 70 percent. That is to
say, there are no is no relation between
lending money and friendship. <이런 경우에는 복수형태 보다는 단수형태로 써주세요 ^^> This
shows that the most important factor in maintaining friendship is not the money
lending relationship, but, trust for each other.
In conclusion, I strongly argue for my standpoint on account
of the two reasons mentioned above. Once again, although the verdict may still
be out, I personally believe that two of my rationales are sufficiently
convincing enough to represent the viewpoints of a majority of people who are
in favor of my claim.
대체적으로 잘 쓰신 것 같네요 ^^ 수고하세요~
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