▶ Your Answer :
As technology
and science advance, things that human have to control are surprisingly
reduced. Automatized facilities lessen work forces and GPS navigation system
help people to find their destination. Also, the introduction of computer,
Internet and advanced transportations such as airplane makes world smaller
place than before. In this context, it is clear that the today’s
life became more comfortable than the time when our ancestors are were young.
To start with, a
development of computer and Internet offer a convenient way of sharing
information and effective method of handling a huge amount of data. Before the
invention of computer and Internet, it took very long times to communicate with
people who are were in oversea and it is were very tiresome
to collect information that is were needed to be researched. <시제를 통일 시켜 주세요 ^^ 과거형태로 다 바꿔주세요~> However, in
today’s life, many portal sites provide a huge amount of
information and through email system, one can keep in touch with whom live in
all over the world. For example, I usually use Google to collect data that I
need for my research and use Gmail to communicate with my co-workers in many
other countries. Likewise, one can effectively do works with help of computers
and Internet.
Moreover, many
people have had benefits of advanced transportations such as a high-speed train
and airplane. They make travel time shorter and one can save unnecessarily
consumed time. To illustrate this point, I usually had to spend a few hours for
business trip before the introduction of KTX, a Korean high-speed train.
However, after the KTX was introduced, time consumed for moving is
incredibly shortened, even less than one hour. People can get to any places in
Korea within one hour with help of KTX. In this sense, people can save a huge
amount of time as high-speed transportations are introduced.
To summarize, I
strongly agree that life became more convenient than before since one can
easily communicate with each other and can save time for moving. These make
works more productively and keep people from some bothersome tasks. For these
reasons, it is evident that the world became more comfortable place.
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