■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words.
■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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▶ Topic :
The life of today became more
comfortable and convenient than the time when grandparents were young. Do you
agree?
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▶ Your Answer :
As technology and science
advance, things that human have to control are surprisingly reduced. Automatized
facilities lessen work forces and GPS navigation system help people to find
their destination. Also, the introduction of computer, Internet and advanced transportations
such as airplane makes world smaller place than before. In this context, it is
clear that the today’s life became more comfortable than the time when our
ancestors are young.
To start with, a development
of computer and Internet offer a convenient way of sharing information and
effective method of handling a huge amount of data. Before the invention of
computer and Internet, it took very long times to communicate with people who are
in oversea and it is very tiresome to collect information that is needed to
research. However, in today’s life, many portal sites provide a huge amount of
information and through email system, one can keep in touch with whom live in
all over the world. For example, I usually use Google to collect data that I
need for my research and use Gmail to communicate with my co-workers in many
other countries. Likewise, one can effectively do works with help of computers
and Internet.
Moreover, many people have had
benefits of advanced transportations such as a high-speed train and airplane.
They make travel time shorter and one can save unnecessarily consumed time. To
illustrate this point, I usually had to spend a few hours for business trip
before the introduction of KTX, a Korean high-speed train. However, after the
KTX was introduced, time consumed for moving is incredibly shortened, even less
than one hour. People can get to any places in Korea within one hour with help
of KTX. In this sense, people can save a huge amount of time as high-speed
transportations are introduced.
To summarize, I strongly agree
that life became more convenient than before since one can easily communicate
with each other and can save time for moving. These make works more
productively and keep people from some bothersome tasks. For these reasons, it
is evident that the world became more comfortable place.
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한글로도 글을 잘 못쓰는데 영어로 쓰려니까 30분 안에 도저히 잘 못쓰겠네요. 표현도 많이 서툴고 부족합니다.
어떠한 지적도 좋으니 많은 조언 부탁드리겠습니다.
감사합니다.