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In the reading passage, writer is saying that early birds are more productive. However, the lecturer do not agree with this opinion.
According to recent research, poeple get sick if they do not sleep as much as specific amount. Therefore, night-owls who wants to be a early birds have to sleep earlier as much as the time you get up earlier. Since there is no actual time saving, there is no extra time as the writer claims. There is no extra time for self-improvement either.
Acccording to the other recent research, there is a genetic factor that affects bio-rhythm. Therefore, someone who are genetically night-owl can be tired easily when he or she tried to get up early. Not every person is (every+ 단수명사) people are appropriate for early -birds life style, as mentioned in the reading passage.
In conclusion, the reading passage claims that early birds are more productive since they can create silent time that can be used for self-improvement and lecturer against it based on minimally required sleep time and genetic difference. (통합형에서는 conclusion 써주지 않아요. 만약 지금 이 practice essay를 통합형 essay로 간주하신다면, 결론을 써주지마시고, 그렇지않고 따로보신다면, 결론을 써주셔도 괜찮습니다.)
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