막 그렇게 이상한 에세이는 아닌데요? 댓글이 엄청 심각하게 달리셨길래ㅋㅋ
Nowadays, parents and children often come in to conflict. It is not far-fetched to say
that recent relationship between parents and children are (a) lot worse than it was fifty years ago. Thus, as (As) a
student, I am in conflict with my parents too. Therefore, I strongly agree with
the above topic.
First of all, The
technology is way ahead (more advanced) compared to fifty years ago. In 1960,
people communicated face to face or by sending mails (at
the) offline (For your information: they had
phones!), whereas we send online
(e)mails and chat online now(a)days. To parents, this may seem litterbit odd because they are adapted to
meeting people outside and get(ting) along (with) them mostly outside. However, to modern children, online
is natural thing (internet is the natural
place to meet). Even though this particular acts (→behavior) of modern children is not
a good thing, they still don't know what is wrong with
(by) themselves. Thus, children get annoyed when
parents rebuke (admonish) them.
Secondly, we don't have much time to have
family conversation nowadays, compared to fifty years ago. Back then, it was
not a hard thing to
communicate each other. Especially in Korea, large family lived together so it
was easier for parents to counsel their children. However, modern day (now) is different. Fathers usually come home late
after work, and their children are also busy doing homeworks and other things. Not like (Unlike in the) past,
since it is hard(er) to find something in common, (which makes) parents (to)
have hard time understanding their kids.