Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people have. I agreee or disagree.
Movies and
televisions nowadays become (became) one of
the most popular (modes of) recreations. The(y) not
only make people excited but also provide useful information. However, such
information is not academic(,) so that movies and televisions rarely have
positive effects.
To begin
with, movies and television programs include inappropriate contents for
teenagers. Violence is the most common scene that one can easily watch from (on) the
media. Children watching these violent scenes may be misled that violence is a
cool thing and not a big deal. Therefore, the wrong and biased opinion may (might) be
in their head (mind). In addition, movies and television stimulate teenager’s
curiosity on (for)
sex. From these media, teenagers without getting sexual education also can (can also) get
a biased idea on sex. For example, because of the increasing number of action
movies and sex appeal in (on) televisions, the crime rate and abortion
rate are (greatly – you don’t need greatly, really) soaring
greatly in Japan.
On the top of
that, kids become passive due to films and television programs. Films and televisions
are so attractive that (for) most (of the) time(,) children
stay at home and watch (→stare) at
the screen. This may preclude (unnatural → keep) children
from playing at outside or hanging
out with their friends. If this continue(s), possibly children may feel lonely and become
passive. Moreover, watching the digital screen
(watching TV / staring at the screen) for a
long time may cause some health problems, especially astigmatism. A good
example is my cousin, a movie mania (maniac). Usually, he spends more than five hours on
watching movies every day. Due to this habit, his eyesight is poor, and he gets
obesity (obese).
Although it is true that movies’ and televisions’ (have, pose) some positive impacts on kids, I strongly believe that negative influences are much greater than these fortes. It is because there are many inappropriate contents for children on films and televisions. Moreover,