▶ Your Answer :
The cast speaker discusses
about doubting of reading passage’s opinion. The reading
passage explains shortages of rural communities for doctors. Then they are also
trying to explain about the reason why young doctors try to avoid staying rural
communities. However, the lecturer’s cast’s opinion, in
lecture, is totally different. The speaker does not cast doesn’t even think that there is a shortage of
doctor in the countryside. Also, he does firmly believe there are really
attractive advantages of staying countryside as a doctor. Here are three reasons
why he thinks like that.
First, the government of each country can use many kinds of
measures to attract many young doctors. As some of results of research show, (그 result 가
무엇인지 설명 해주세요) that was successful. Therefore, the
worries about low pay(ment) in the reading passage could be solved/handled by the
government’s support.
Second, doctors working in rural area can contact to other
doctors or advisor via phone, e-mail, online chatting. Therefore, there is no need
to worry the worries about lack of access to others would
be nothing to worry about.
Third, living in those cutting edge cities is stressful for
people make people stressful. Especially, in case of
the bustling hospital, working there would be really stressful. Because of
that, many people prefer to work in balanced and peaceful life. Also people who
have
grown
up in countryside prefer to live in quiet environment. That would be converse opinion
to reading passage which mentioned countryside is not attractive.
For these three reasons, the speaker cast
thinks that working in a rural area as a doctor is more beneficial.
통합형 구성으로는 일반적이지 않은 구성을 택하셨네요~ 하하 J cast 라는 단어를 speaker 대신 쓰신 것 같은데 lecturer 을 대신하는 말로는
익숙하지 않은 단어입니다~ 수고하셨습니다. ^^
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