▶ Your Answer :
The reading passage lists that some astrophysicists said
that people may live at Venus(,) because thankfully thanks to the star has many similar aspects with
Earth, but this will not be real event because of some problems. However, the
speaker argues that problems do not matter because those can be overcame
with the help of scientific techniques like regulating temperatures about the
problem that although there are many problems, people can overcome the problems
by scientific techniques such as regulating temperatures.
To begin with, according to the article, Venus is
not adequate place where human can live to live human, because there
are too high air pressures comparing to than our lands. However, the speaker said that people can
deal the problem. People can make artificial facility. The man-made system can
regulate the pressures of Venus. (Moreover, if people cope with the problem of pressures,
they may live the place like our earth.)(<- speaker 의 주장 자체가 사람이 venus 에 살 수 있다는 것이므로 굳이 반복하실 필요 없습니다)
On top of that this is also argues that a lack of the
water will cause/make a problem, and there are no molecular oxygen for sustaining retaining human’s life.
On the contrary, the lecturer claims that people have a solution which is to utilize by scientific
skill. People can make water and regulate carbon dioxide. In case of water
making, people can transform the useless water to useful water by chemical
reaction.
Lastly, the reading passage points out that Venus
has gigantic areas of gas to their sky, and the areas would make makes a problem such
as a radiation of sun’s energy. On the other hand, the speaker completely says
that people can make some artificial instrument to obtain the energy. Although
the thick lay of gas hinders an absorption of sun rays sun’s rays, they can get the energy from by their
equipment. This equipment is positioned in highest atmosphere. It is not
affected by the gas disc, and people can obtain the sun’s energy to make a
livable place.
reading 과
lecture 의 비교/대조를 잘 이루어주셨습니다. 표현하실
때 조금 더 효과적으로 전달할 수 있는 연습만 보충하시면 좋을 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
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