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In today’s society, it is widely believed that young people are more likely to make a contribution to developing the world than those in the past. Some people advocate that today’s young people are willing to make a contribution to developing the world because they are interest in any issue over the world unlike in the past. However, I disagree with this view. I firmly believe that young people are not likely to make any contribution for world and there are two reasons that could validate on my position.
The first point that I would like to make is that today’s individuals has no sacrifice to developing the world because they focus on their successful life. In these days, young people are overwhelmed by a lot of works or assignments for their success. Therefore, they don’t have a much contribution to advancing the world. According to a recent study found by the Korea National Research Center, it indicated that people are more interest in their life than in the world. To be more specific, more than 70% of young people under 30years old are willing to make a contribution to enhancing their life for success not the world. In this regard, it is common that people usually more focus on enhancing their life rather than the world.
Another compelling reason is that young people in the past were willing to help advancing to the world. Let me take my experience as an example. When I took in history class, I learned about how young people help to developing the world. As I learned, people in the past often made a contribution when their country or the world was in trouble such as depression in economic. For example, 30 years ago, many young people over the world helped to recovering my country when my country had a lack of financial. This is because they have a much interest in development of the world. Through this experience, I realized that people are not willing to make a contribution to the world. Therefore, now, it is no surprise that young people don’t try to help for development of the world because they feel don’t need to know and help the world.
All things considered, it is my belief that my argument regarding this topic has been effectively and precisely delivered with the reasons mentioned above.
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