▶ Your Answer :Some people might say that they think having
big dreams is better than having too realistic dreams. However, in my opinion,
I think it is better to have a clear goal possible dreams than having an unclear dream. This
is because they have a higher chance to achieve a success. Moreover, having ambiguous
dreams can face many struggles.First of all, having realistic dreams have
many possibilities for getting success compared to not having it. To be specific, they
have many ways to get advice to get a job they want. And, they can prepare for
the goal more easily. For example, a person who wants to be a doctor in the
future. He can prepare for his or her future by studying in that field or reading books about being a
doctor. Also, he can ask a real doctor how to become a doctor. Besides this
there are so many ways to search about how to become a doctor. Having realistic
dream will lead to the ultimate point faster.
On top of that, they will face many
hardships if they have unclear dreams. This is because ambitious dreams might be
impossible to reach like being a hero of the movie or becoming a certain animal. (You misunderstood the topic) These are impossible to do in reality. Therefore, having those dreams are just
a waste of time. Even though the goal is not dramatic like the example that stated
here, the preparation time for an unclear goal can face various struggles. Even
if you have dream, it is hard to apply without having detail steps or plans.
In conclusion, there are more possibilities
to success with clear dreams. On the other hand, having an unclear goal can meet
diverse challenges. In this regard, it is better to have realistic possible
dreams other than have ambitious dreams.
채점기준표 | Grammar | Contents | Example | Coherence | 점수 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 3 | Score | Limited 10-17 |
- 전치사 다음은 명사 또는 동명사 형태로 바꾸어주세요.
- ambitious goal 의 목적을 제대로 이해하셔야 합니다. - unclear goal로 언급하셨는데, 이 부분과 함께 등장하는 어려움 등에 대하여 자세히 설명하여 주세요. |
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