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Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day's work. Others prefer to get up later in the day and work until late at night. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Some people say that it is better to get up late in the day and work until late at night. However, they are tricking themselves into bad health and lack of energy. I think that it is very important to get up early in the morning and start the day’s work. This is because night is supposed to be a time for resting, and also because most works and schools in the world start early in the morning.
First of all, night is a time for resting. You should rest in your room and you’ll be able to start the next day in a fresher mood. Night is dark and cold. Your body is trying to waste as least energy as possible and is not willing to work or move when it is cold. Also, your brain starts to produce hormones that make you want to take a break and also grow healthier. To give you a specific example, it is a known fact that Growth Hormone (성장호르몬?) for children is mostly produced and works actively at nighttime, ranging from 10 p.m. to 2 a.m. If children, who need to grow and be healthy, stay late at night, they won’t grow. In addition, your brain is built in a way which lets you work better during daytime.
Moreover, many of the schools and works in the world start in the morning. If you don’t get up early in the morning and be diligent, you won’t be able to attend school or work in a big, famous business because they won’t accept you. No matter how talented and smart you are, you will not have a chance to be recognized. For example, my uncle was very smart but he wasn’t an early bird – rather a late owl person – and therefore had a problem getting a professional job. He was accepted by a famous company, but he couldn’t get to work on time. He tried very hard to be an early bird, which was a relatively difficult attempt for him –even though he succeeded. This shows that if you are a night owl, then you might have problems getting along with the society.
Not only is it true that night is a time for resting after all, but the fact that it would be hard for someone who is not an early bird to get along with other people in the world is something that you should accept and acknowledge. Therefore, I prefer getting up early in the morning and starting the day’s work rather than staying up late at night and come around late the next morning.