■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : Television advertising directed toward children under the age of five should not be allowed | |
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Some people think that it is better to allow television advertising directed toward children under the age of five. However, in my opinion, television advertising directed toward children under the age of five should not be allowed. This is because it could lead to juvenile crime and deliever pervert idea to children.
To begin with, there are many violent scenes in TV advertisement. Therefore, it could have bad effect on children. For example, If a child accepts violent information constantly, it could lead to juvenile crime afterward.
On top of that, there are many pervert informations in TV advertisement. Children under the age of five who do not have deciding ability are inclined to accept the informations directly. Therefore, If a child accepts pervert informations continuously in child age, They could not make a decision appropriatly.
To sum up, television advertising directed toward children under the age of five could lead to juvenile crime and deliever pervert idea to children. In this regard, I agree with the statement that television advertising directed toward children under the age of five should not be allowed.
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