▶ Your Answer :
It's certainly true that today studying overseas is a kind of trend in our society which persuit globalization as many parents want to make their children well rounded person. By the virtue of cutting edge technology and trasportation system, it's not challenging to go abroad anymore. According to a recent survey, hundreds of students move to another country to study at university with better circumstance and faculty. They believe it would proffer their children enormous opportunity to escape from the limited, narrow view point and take a broad prespectives. Others, howeverm have an opposite attitude toward the issue. They argue that studying overseas early, can cause nontrivial disturbance in their identity. In this essay, I'll make an analysis of the advantages and disadvantages in this following paragraphs.
On the one hand, studying another contry help students independent and self-sufficient person ; it's ovious that adversity and challenge is converted into a great and cherish experience and wisdom when
they go through it. If they live apart from their family and friends, there is no one to save them when they are in trouble. At the end of suffering, students finally learn their own way to solve all the vexing problems facing throughout their life stages. Moreover,It proffer lots of chances to meet various people
who has different racem religion and view points.
On the other hand, many people should take into account that if they go abroad for studying by themselves in the early years, it gives them harmful effect which is essential to establish their own identity. we've experienced many cases from news and documentary program delt with serious problems and complications caused by early independence for studying abroad. According to news, they were sent to overseas such as USA, England, Philippine and etc, for achieving English fluency
and even worse they tend to loose their national identity meaning who I am and where I am from, especially when they attend in a mixed school and are bullied and discriminated consistantly because of their race.
Taking all those factors in consideration, I would argue that the disadvatages of studying overseas outweigh the advantages. Loosing their identity could bring serious consequence in their whole life and poses great threat to family and society. I strongly believe that there are another effective wars to improve their ability in their own country without going out thanks to high technology.
As an byproducts of high technology, computer is used as a great tool of learning foreign languages and by exploiting it, we can keep connection with friends globally and have lectures in another universities in abroad at modest prices. I predict as our IT technology is growing acceleratively, more and more it will bring a striking effects on our life.
첨삭부탁드려요..ㅠㅠ 감사해요..
점수도..혹시? |