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Some people believe that their pets such as dogs, cats, birds, and other animals have to obey them no matter what, because they consider their pets as one of their possessed things.뭔가 문장이 어색합니다, 다시 한번 체크해주세여~~ However, unlike the group, I’m sure that a relationship between human beings and pets has a good influence on both of people and animals. This is largely because the relationship can provide an effect of decreasing stress for people; moreover, people who can’t biologically cannot have a baby can have an alternative way by the relationship with their pets.having pets.
First of all, people can relieve their stress through spending time with their animal which has a family-like relationship with them. The rationale behind this is that, even though animals can’t communicate to with their owners, animals can give people happiness only by being with people.them. According to one medical study, it’s proven that animals not only animals can help people relieve their stress, but also they even cure sick people. Although animals can’t have a conversation with people, they keep being stay with people or patient for long time so that animals make people treat animals as members of their family.
Moreover, the close relationship between people and animals can give another chance to have a b1aby to people for people who cannot have a baby.who cannot give a birth. The This kind of people treats their pets as their offspring. For example, one of my friends diagnosed that she cannot have a baby. Because Since(문장 시작할때 because는 좋지 않아요) she really wanted to have a baby, her pain got worse and worse. To make matters worse, she tried to kill herself because of fatal depression. However, one day, her husband brought two puppies. She didn’t like the puppies at first. A couple of months later, she started to open her mind to her pets. The more she spent her time with her pets, the better her depression was. These days, she treats her puppies as her children.
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