주제는 work by hand or using machines 입니다
처음이라서 부족할꺼에요 부탁드립니다 ㅠ_ㅠ
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Compared with using machine, working by hand is diligent and industrious. But personally, the advantages of using machines far outweigh the disadvantages.
First, machines are very precise and effective.
For instance, before industrial revolution, Our country used to be a mainly agricultural society.
When we the society, working by hand is not only have long time but also have not precise.
But after industrial revolution, when using machine, not only a faster But also makes a bigger profit than by hand machine.
Above all l think that it is very natural that work pursue profit
Second, If it were not for machines, workers would hard.
Because machines also grown in large quantities at time.
Although working by hand, there is no doubt that most workers are very difficult
than using machines
In conclusion, nowdays using machines is attractive option for workers and consumer l think that people shoud prefer using machines to work by hand. Using machines are large propit. Althoung people like deligent, they have to focus on economic