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Q: In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details.
People may think teenagers do not need to have jobs while they are still students. I partly agree with this idea because it is a sure thing for students to focus on their studies. However, I believe that teenagers having jobs as students, is a good idea for there are more advantages to it. Teenagers learn to become more responsible when they have jobs. Also, they get a work experience which may help them in the future.
Q: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is most certain that people do not want to do things that they do not enjoy doing. Such undesirable things can be studying, exercising, eating vegetables, and etc. Indeed, there are things people do not like doing but must do for their own goods. I believe people should sometimes overcome their appetites and perform things they do not enjoy. People definitely learn something out of anything. There must be lesson learned after every action done. Besides, people live in a comfort zone, not trying to challenge themselves when they do only the things they enjoy doing. And living in a comfort zone isn’t always good.
Q: Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The Earth has been exhausted by human activity. People are being selfish, trying to deplete all the resources available and doing almost everything to make their lives better. Making their lives better is not a negative thing but the fact is that they do not care about the environment. Such a self-centered thinking has created a lot of damages to the Earth and will bring about a natural disaster in the near future. Among many causes, I think deforestation and gas fuels are the main reasons why the Earth is being harmed.
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