Topic : There is no reason to be impolite to others.
The opinion is divided whether there is no reason to be impolite to others or not. In my opinion, there are some reasons to be impolite to other. First, television program mislead people. Second, there is an inaccurate information in online. (First~~Second~~도 좋지만 접속사를 이용해서 연결해주는것도 괜찮습니다~~)
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First, today’s television program provides viewers aggressive and impolite scenes. Unlike in the past, broadcast company today use inappropriate contents, such as sex or violent scenes to attract more watcher. Therefore, when exposing a long time, people are likely to be impulsive in their behavior and attitude. According to a survey, the number of inappropriate scenes has increased more than tripled in than the past. According to this phenomenon, the number coincides with the increase in school violence and teenager’s pregnancy. Also, according to the increase of aggressive scenes in television, the number of fight in society has increased so far. Therefore, television programs affect the behavior of people.
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Second, various information in online helps become people makes people become impolite. In the past, people were not able to use the computer because there was no computer. However, since the development of technology, we can use computer and also search a large amount of information. Of them,those there is much are a lot of inaccurate information. Let me take brother’s experience. When I was a high school student, my younger brother was 8 years old. At that time, he started using the computer and found an attraction in the use of computer. He often searched the information about computer game and accessed to chatting program. Not long afterwards, I was able to catch an adverse effect of using the computer. After using the computer, he became aggressive and frequently became angry. And then, he lost a lot of friend in his school because he always bothered his friend and used inappropriate teenage language.
In conclusion, because of the reasons mentioned above, I strongly believe that not only television program but also the use of the internet affects people’s character
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