The speaker mainly talks about two types of people who get up early. In the lecture, he enumerates disadvantages of getting up early. The speaker insists that there are two types of people
, such as thewhich are the night owls and the early bird. The main thought of speaker is that convincing recent study proves that thereisare two deleterious shortcomings related to early bird or waking up early. The shortcomings which were mentioned in the reading passage are as follows: waking up early is unhealthy for human body and body's natural rhythm cannot cope with waking up so that people cannot function well. These points strongly contradict the reading passage's assertion that the early birds are considerably more effective and productive.
통합형 인트로 치곤 좀 긴 편입니다. 그냥 간단하게 리딩 패시지와 리스닝에선 뭐에 대해 말하고 있는데 리스닝이 리딩의 의견에 반대한다라고 적으셔도 큰 문제는 없습니다
First of all, the speaker argues that getting up early is very unhealthy for human body. To be specific, not only you don't indeed gain extra time but also you can debilitate your health. Human body need certain amount of predetermined hours to sleep. Whereas if you sleep less, you cannot cope and often come down with illness/. Therefore this finding evidently rebuts the reading passage's argument that waking up merely a little earlier in the morning allows people to use their time for constructive purposes.
In addition, the speaker asserts that even if some people handle drawbacks of sleeping less, whether those can perform their work well is debatable. To illustrate, every body has different biorhythm from each other, thus some people can't function well because of weariness. Although the reading passage claims that the morning hours are usually the most productive for people due to fewer distraction, it is
worthworse if people with less sleep cannot show their full ability to get their work done on time. Therefore this point refutes the reading passage's explanation that earning extra morning by getting earrly can offer a chance for people to concentrate their work without any distraction.To wrap up, even though the reading passage claim that the old saying " the early bird gets the worm" has been proven time and time throughout history. The speaker disagrees with the statement and supports his idea by using recent case study which shows disadvantages of getting up early such as hamfulness and ineffectiveness.
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